Marketing Focus
Laser shows hidden dust, Auto saves battery: a quick, corner-smart clean for small TLV flats
מערכת N99
7 בספטמבר 2025
כ-5 דקות קריאה
- Attention triggers — what breaks their “scroll” and why (LOCAL)
- Green dust lines glowing on TLV tiles at dusk; you see what the broom missed (FACT).
- One slow pass under the sofa, bin shows fine grey “fog” from today’s hamsin (ESTIMATE/LOCAL).
- Pet‑hair spiral tool pulling long hair without scissors—oddly satisfying (FACT).
- LCD dirt count jumping near the balcony door where sand collects (FACT/LOCAL).
- “From gan to guests in 10 minutes” split‑screen: before crumbs / after clean (ESTIMATE/LOCAL).
- Counterintuitive truths — 5–8 “It seems X, actually Y” statements (RANGE/ESTIMATE)
- Seems: More light means cleaner. Actually: Lower room light makes the green laser reveal more dust so you miss less (RANGE).
- Seems: Strongest mode first. Actually: Auto adapts power and often finishes faster with better battery left (ESTIMATE).
- Seems: Robots handle daily crumbs. Actually: Robots avoid corners and raised edges; a quick stick pass clears the “always missed” zones (ESTIMATE).
- Seems: Bigger vacuum = deeper clean. Actually: Focused suction and sealed filtration capture more fine dust per minute in small flats (ESTIMATE).
- Seems: Hair tools are the same. Actually: Anti‑tangle engineering reduces stops to cut hair, saving time (FACT/ESTIMATE).
- Seems: Particle LCD is a gimmick. Actually: Seeing counts drop room‑to‑room tells you when you’re done (ESTIMATE).
- Seems: One head fits all. Actually: Fluffy Optic on hard floors; Motorbar on rugs = fewer re‑passes (FACT/ESTIMATE).
- Reframes — convert top pains into empowering frames the audience accepts (ESTIMATE)
- “Crumbs after dinner” → A 3‑minute wall‑to‑dock ritual that ends the day calm.
- “Sand everywhere” → Map the hotspots (balcony, hallway) and hit only those in Auto.
- “Battery anxiety” → One charge, one route; Boost is a spot treatment, not the plan.
- “Partner won’t use it” → Keep it docked eye‑level; one trigger, Auto, done.
- “Small flat, no storage” → The dock is your tidy zone; tools live there, not in drawers.
- “Tech overwhelm” → The LCD is a confidence light, not homework.
- Creative hooks — 10 short hook lines in the audience’s lexicon:
- Question: “See the dust the sun exposes—want to catch it at 8pm instead?”
- Contrast: “Tiny flat. Big clean. No cord.”
- Myth flip: “Not all light is vanity—this one shows you the mess.”
- Number twist: “60 minutes feels longer when you stop doing second passes.”
- Micro‑story: “Five minutes before bedtime—no sand on tiny feet.”
- Question: “Tiles, parquet, rug—one pass or three? Let Auto decide.”
- Contrast: “Hair screw vs. scissors: which lives in your sofa?”
- Myth flip: “Strong ≠ loud. Use Boost only when the mess asks.”
- Number twist: “240AW for the stubborn, Auto for everything else.”
- Micro‑story: “Dizengoff dog walk → hall sand trail → gone before emails.”
- Analogies & metaphors (ANALOGY) — 5 analogies with a one-line mapping to the audience’s world
- Headlamp for floors: The laser is your trail light for crumbs and dust (ANALOGY).
- Cruise control: Auto mode adjusts power like speed on a hill, saving “fuel” (ANALOGY).
- Lint roller for the flat: Quick grab cleans what’s visible plus the micro‑stuff (ANALOGY).
- Espresso shot: Boost is short, strong, targeted—not your whole breakfast (ANALOGY).
- Airport security tray: The LCD shows what passed through, so you know it’s clear (ANALOGY).
- Pattern breaks in format — structural moves that keep attention (sentence length, rhythm, second-person, rule of three)
- Short. Punchy. Second‑person.
- Rule of three: crumbs, hair, sand—one pass.
- Split‑screen: with laser vs. without, same strip of tile.
- Rhythm shift: Slow under‑sofa glide… quick pivot to rug stripe.
- Count‑down captions: 3 rooms. 2 heads. 1 charge.
- Lateral proof — non-obvious proof cues that feel authentic to this audience (ESTIMATE)
- Show bin contents after the “clean‑looking” hallway at dusk—fine grey dust proves pickup (ESTIMATE).
- Time a full 70–90 m² loop in Auto with a phone timer, no cuts (ESTIMATE).
- Film hair screw tool pulling long hair from the family sofa in one continuous shot (ESTIMATE).
- Display LCD counts dropping room‑to‑room; freeze‑frame at “done” (ESTIMATE).
- Dock placement in a narrow corridor; pan to closed door to show no drill mess beyond (ESTIMATE).
- Safe provocations — edgy but respectful statements; clearly note boundaries that must not be crossed
- “If your broom ‘worked,’ why do the dust lines show up every morning?” (ESTIMATE)
- “Robots love circles. Corners? Not so much.” (ESTIMATE)
- “Boost isn’t a lifestyle.” Use it like chili—sparingly (ESTIMATE). Boundaries: No shaming parenting, no medical claims, no loud humor on solemn days, no war/trauma references (FACT/ETHICS).
- Micro-experiments — 3–5 low-risk tests to validate angles (headlines/snippets/soft CTAs); no links
- Headline A/B: “See what the laser reveals” vs. “One pass, real clean”; CTA: “Yalla—5‑minute demo” (ESTIMATE).
- Story poll: “Auto or Boost—what cleaned your hall faster today?” with a follow‑up tip (ESTIMATE).
- Reel test: Split‑screen laser on/off over the same tile strip; measure saves vs. shares (ESTIMATE).
- Runtime sticker: Live 15‑minute kitchen‑to‑balcony loop, battery % overlay; CTA: “Count with me” (ESTIMATE).
- DM micro‑CTA: “Send apartment size (m²), we’ll reply with a runtime plan” (ESTIMATE).
- Do/Don’t language — words, tones, and rhetorical moves to use vs. avoid for this audience
- Do: “clean in minutes,” “reveals what others miss,” “one charge whole flat,” “grab‑and‑go,” “proof in the bin” (ESTIMATE).
- Do: Local cues—balagan, sand season, gan crumbs (LOCAL).
- Don’t: “Revolutionary,” “perfect home,” medical promises, status flex (ETHICS/ESTIMATE).
- Don’t: Walls of text, heavy jargon, guilt frames (ESTIMATE).
- Risk map — what can backfire with these angles and how to mitigate
- Over‑promising runtime → Show mode/floor context and live timers (FACT/ESTIMATE).
- Laser hype in bright daylight → Demo at dusk/low light; note rugs show less (RANGE).
- Weight/overhead fatigue → Focus on floor use balance; show short above‑head bursts (ESTIMATE).
- Price pushback → Lead with time saved + service clarity (warranty/returns) (ESTIMATE).
- Storage in rentals → Offer no‑drill stand option or tidy corner placements (ESTIMATE).
- Writer recap (5 lines):
- Core attention insight in one sentence: TLV parents stop scrolling when they see hidden dust made visible and cleared fast in small spaces (ESTIMATE).
- The cautious promise of a creative/reframed approach: See more, pass less—use Auto most, Boost when needed, finish on one charge in typical flats (FACT/ESTIMATE).
- 3 critical advantages (one–two words each): Visible dust; Smart power; Hair control (FACT/ESTIMATE).
- One key objection + short response: “Battery won’t last.” → “Auto + targeted Boost typically covers 60–90 m² on one charge; let’s time your route” (RANGE).
- Neutral/empathetic CTA (no pricing if uncertain): See it catch what you can’t—yalla, book a 5‑minute floor demo (ESTIMATE).